Monday, April 29, 2013

The Beginning.

I will share the beginning of a story that I started writing two years ago.


A TRUE L<3ve Story about E&C

Once upon a time their was a girl about 19, her name was Claire, she was average height, thin and really fun and outgoing to be with! She was finishing up school before Christmas break. During her break she went to the gym with her mom and worked out. The next morning she went to the pool to swim some laps, so she could keep up her training. While she was swimming she noticed a total hottie, he was Mr EPIC(extravagant person in Claire's heart. She didn’t know him but she did know that he was so cute, as she was lifting up her arm to stoke she would look at his perfect body, secretly.. after she was done she went to the hot tub with her mother. As they were leaving her mother said bye and then I said “Merry Christmas” then he said hey , merry Christmas, whats your name? I replied back Claire, and he said “my name is.....Mr epic( I don’t know a name for him) I said, then he asked me how old I was and I replied 17 and he said he was 19. then he asked me if I wanted to go to dinner, I told him I would love to and he said he would pick me up at 5:00 .. when I got home I told my dad and my mom. As 4:00 rolled around I decided that I would just do my hair nice and simple, and clothes just right but not to fancy, I put some money in my bag , just in case he needed a little extra help in paying for dinner. Finally it is 4;45 and there is a knock at the door, I go to answer the door, Hey I said. Hey are your parents home? ( I am at my grandmas and I gave him the address before ) after he talks to my mom, I get in his car and we drive away.( Lets say that epic is the kind of guy who is sweet and is not the type who doesn't blast music he listens and starts the conversation,
Epic: so where are you from?
Claire: Utah, are you from here?/
Epic: yes, what do you like to do?
Claire: umm swim, dance and hangout and do fun stuff..
Epic;cool, I am a life guard, I swim and pretty much random stuff.
Claire: do you have a job?
Epic life guarding( giggle)
Claire: ya besides life guarding( giggle)
epic; ya I work at little ceasers.
Claire cool... is that where we are going?
Epic: nope, where do you work?
Clara: Pay less shoe store..
Epic: nice, I was wondering if you wanted to go swimming with me , it is a work employee party and they said we could invite anyone that we want..
Claire: Ummmmmmmmmmmmm sure. That would be fun.. ( what kind of swimming)
Epic: Just messing around.
Claire: sure.
Epic: well here we are..close your eyes. He opens my door and holds my hand as we walk in to the door of olive garden. My eyes are still closed as we walk in and sit down.
Claire: can I open my eyes>
Epic Yes
Claire: Wow I love this place!!
We started talking some more as we were waiting for the waiter to come .
Epic: so what do you want to get?
Claire: umm I think I will get the Alfredo noodles, what are you going to get?/
Epic: I think I will get the steak,
Claire: cool,
.......................
Hello may I start you guys with something to drink?
Epic: I will take a lemonade.

OK we have lots of flavors.......
Epic then I will have a raspberry..
OK
what can I get for you mam?\
Claire: I will get a strawberry lemonade..
OK I will bring those right out.
Thanks..

after the waiter gave us our food we started eating..
Claire: excuse me I have to go to the ladies room.
Epic OK ill be here..
.
would you guys like any dessert?
Epic: we'll get the dessert for two to share.

Claire: what did you get?
Epic:The brownie ice cream thing
Claire: OK that sounds good.

After we finished the dessert , we get  drive back.

" Thanks for a nice night" Claire said hoping for a hug. " Your welcome." He hugs her and goes back to his car and drives home.

 

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